reflection on work so far.

I just had a discussion with my media teacher and went over my work and see what I could improve and what I need to do. The list which we made is:

• to post this and improve on feedback
• post video to vimeo successfully
• I could make a vlog instead of writing it out
• check spelling and punctuation
• expand on work and describe more with more formal words
• review a opening sequence
• talk about trailers and identify that I know it's a opening sequence
• change words for more formal
• write about the whole plot even after the opening 2 minutes
• talk about health and safety
• expand on reflection on work
• Add storyboard for priminary.
• write storyboard for opening sequence
• add 30 degree rule
• take location shot photos

I am hoping to doo all of these points before next lesson if not I will catch up and finish it just after.